Hello, i am a bit lost as it seems there is no more questing after i raised celestia's affection and unlock all her scenes, but i see there are at least 20+ scenes that need unlocking. What am i supposed to do next? can i get help pls
I'm at the part of the story with Altina being bought by the MC but so far, I very much agree with one of the comments down below.
The protagonist is a wuss. It doesn't feel like I'm playing "as" him but rather, I'm just watching him be dick on himself. Last I checked, the description says that the protagonist is supposed to be the "hero of the story but he doesn't feel like a hero at all. He saved his landlady and friend, then revived Azula but after that, everything went downhill regarding his character. He's too indecisive in scenarios that matter the most. On the off chance that he makes a decision, the story forces you to make the worse choice. For example, the story established Vie as an extremely arrogant and hostile character towards the MC but doing Altina's questline, you're given the option to tie loose ends with her or let her go. Oh. Lo and behold, you get a game over when choosing one of the choices.
Second, some of the romanceable characters aren't likeable at all. For example, I get that Estelle is a tsundere type but the way she's made is, well, annoying, to say the least. Her lines are so overused, she doesn't improve her character, she gets involved in other characters' story arcs so much that it's more of a hindrance than a joy to see it. By the time I get to her own story arc, I already got tired of seeing her that I no longer paid attention to the dialogue and just skipped everything because I already had my fill of Estelle screen time through the other quests. Same with Azula. Her character is extremely ironic by saying that her species don't care about morality but she chastises the MC for lewding on other girls, specifically Altina's questline.
Third is the lore. It's so jam packed with story that it's getting old. Don't misunderstand. I like it when novels delve into the details but it's done so rough in this specific title. Flashbacks, for the most part, are welcome, but it is so out of place in here. As an example, a good flashback chapter is done in another visual novel called My Bully is My Lover (if any of you reading my comment read that novel, you probably know which chapter I'm talking about). The flashback in that visual novel chapter is EXTREMELY LONG but I did not feel tired of seeing it. In fact, I would've replayed the novel without skipping anything. However, in here, the flashbacks just makes the story more vague contrary to MBiML tying up loose ends in the story via the flashback. It is not enjoyable to say the least. Besides, I feel like the flashbacks are trying hard to give personality to the characters involved but it's doing more harm than good, IMO, because one, I'd rather give the screentime to the MC and have him improve his personality instead of establishing something else that happened outside of the novel's time setting. Two, you're walking on the edge of a knife here by showcasing the girls involved with other dudes. I know they aren't NTR, just to make that clear but I wouldn't want to read a story about a guy watching his girlfriend's old AV tapes.
Fourth, side characters. They are getting introduced by the droves and it's becoming a chore to remember them. I don't know if you have a plan to involve the Champions into the romance but they don't interest me at the moment. Suddenly focusing the camera on them when the questline is about someone else is annoying. I would've understood if it was a Main Quest but nope, it's listed as Altina's (Honestly, it feels more of a main quest so just gonna put that opinion out there). It's the same with Estelle as I mentioned above. She's way too involved in other character's story quests.
Now, I may be blabbering about Altina too much but that's just because it's where I noticed a ton of really bad story details. It's not an isolated case. I can pretty much keep going with Estelle, Celestia, and Laureate.
With the Princess, she's the same as Azula. Her character is extremely ironic. She's the person running the Scarlet Contract business but she chastises the MC for using her services.
Makoto's mistaken for a guy trope got old after the first one.
Celestia's character development is downhill. She was a better character before joining the household. At least, she was doing her best when she was living in the street. After being bought, she turned to this kind of slobbering mess of a person. The story isn't helping by justifying it as "half breeds do what half breeds want". Contradictory, I'd say. She's tamed and educated judging by her story but her current personality says otherwise.
PS: I'm not doing this criticism out of spite but rather, in hopes of seeing improvement to the game.
I don't understand why you're being downvoted. You stated your opinion on a game, and while not everyone will agree with it, others will, including me. But I guess some people can't accept that
I can pretty much understand the downvotes. I read and reread my comment before and after posting it and I can actually see it coming as hateful towards the VN. That's why I included the postscript at the end. I wanted to let the reader (especially the dev, seeing as he's already seen the comment) know that I posted the comment with the best intentions as I really want to see the story and characters move towards better development. However, I wouldn't have bren able to get the message across if I sugarcoated my words or if I walked on eggshells around it.
Serena is great early (and if you're lazy). But as you progress through the game, the other girls provide much higher income (income scales with quests).
I know I'm several updates behind but thanks for fixing how the Android version is installed I can finally play the game that I loved so much and excited to see what new stuff you added
The premise is enticing- slave fetish fits into the harem genre well and putting it in law form justifies the player's actions within this small fantasy town. That validation is huge for a game like this and provides a solid foundation for world building.
However, I have to agree with many of the comments below. MC is incredibly cringe. Characters also don't seem to grow- they just get more or less attached to each other. These factors remove any sense of immersion. So instead of playing as the MC, the player ends up watching a story of some loser fumbling through life, accidentally gaining ownership of his friends and (family). Granted, I'm not caught up to the latest update, so hopefully that changes soon.
It's been a bumpy ride so far, but there's still a ton of potential here. Unlike similar games, the girls' tits are actually mostly proportional to their frames. The baseline character profiles are unique enough to tell them apart immediately. The overarching story is engaging enough to encourage progression. With some small changes and a bit more content, it could easily be one of the more successful games out there.
I sincerely look forward to the game's development and hope the community feedback has some impact on its growth.
Thanks for the feedback. I think I could have made the MC more likeable especially early on. I think he does get better as the course of the game, but that's just my opinion.
I thought Sakura from naruto was the only character I hated because she was just way to dumb and stuck up for the protagonists feelings. But Estella is I guess her sister. Fucking hate both for just being this dense. If I could make Estella suffer in this vn I would do it without a second thought, even if I had to go back and suffer myself for the story to progress. Thanks my rant for garbage Estella.
Well the vn is really nice. I do hope to get to finish it in some more time. All the best for future updates.
I've played this game on and off throughout development but it always gets harder and harder to come back to it simply due to the character development or honestly the complete lack of character development, it's almost like they are Family Guy Characters in how they constantly make the same mistakes over and over again yet no matter what happens to them and what thye "learn" they simply continue being the same person that they where when you first met them and this goes heavily for the MC as well. I guess you are trying to make it so that the MC isn't a character that is already extremely powerful or that they have to work for what they have, but when you make your MC also someone tht has a subway foot long and the typical handsome build body every other MC these types of games have It just leads to your MC being very pathetic.
Don't get me wrong stuff like this can work Lewd Town if that's the correct name is a game similar to this where the MC starts out for the majority of the first chapter of the game being a VERY ugly disgusting character, extremely anti social and also perverted as all fuck. But over time through the first chapter He ends up losing up bit by bit until he gets forcefully transformed into your typical Hentai protag. He still has his old shit personality he's just hot with a big dick now and throughout the rest of the story he DOES get better and grow stronger to fit into his new role.
I Feel like that's what you guys are trying to do with this MC but it's just not getting to that point at all. He's weak, he's a push over, he's a cuck basically. For something that states no NTR you crafted the MC that honestly Deserves to be NTRed the most
Is the mc will stay like this or he will awaken something other than his thing?
Edit: i didn't mean anything bad im just curious and sarcastic maybe.. Im invested on the story but i cant help to see the mc being left out in terms of ability to fight and have to rely to the girls in dire cases.
Played through most of the game and I am divided. One half I like the game as it is good but with the other half the story is painfully frustrating. So this will come off as probably a rant or tyraid, I like the gameplay but hate how irritating the characters can be.
The game needs work, it has problems on Android and ends up closing out on me when I play for a time. The auto saves are also not consistent so it makes these occurrences a pain. So manually saving is a constant necessity. Other than that it isn't to bad as a game still in development.
As for the story, the characters are mixed, some you can like and others are just painfully annoying. The main character is an idiot as far as I can see. He is constantly pushed around by everyone, with that type of tendency it is a miracle he went out of his way to save anyone, given the first choice in the game which is a serious one, he is either pathetic or someone who is at least trying, and his redeeming quality being he isn't a complete scumbag and tries to help others. The other characters are a mix of hardworking or smart people with quirks that make them likable, or they are the most inept and aggravating of the cast. It's hard playing the game when characters cause problems again and again, and don't learn or change, the MC who is the player being one of those characters.
The game is fun but is dragged down by characters who will repeat the same tendencies of causing problems and doing really dumb things. I actually had headaches dealing with certain characters and story moments, because they were that dumb. So I am taking a break from this game. I want to see this game again when it is more developed, so hopefully the Android version gets some tweaks by then to.
Thanks for making this game JYP GAMES, but I can't fully enjoy playing it. Please accept my apologies for how rude this comment must have been, I do like this game and the mysterious Scarlet lore, it is just grating to deal with characters who are so frustrating.
If i remember this game right at least the last time i checked it out its not so much that the mc is punchable its that he seems week. The author seems to be trying to make him seem more likable by making him weaker which is having an opposite effect at least that is what is bothering me. He is a push over perv remincent of Issei but without Issei's good qualities of actually being decent underneath the perverseness while also having potential to back up. Also in the potential department actually considering giving this another shot to see if that particular issue was fixed.Also the one animal eared girl betrayal scene has made me reluctant to give it another shot am debating with myself.
My issue with the MC isn't really that he's weak. It's that he barely seems to have any redeeming qualities at all. Or rather, the few redeeming qualities he has seen to be continuously ignored in favor of him just being a pathetic, perverted, borderline rapey moron. The beginning was good. He was an unmotivated dude who just kinda existed, then he's presented with a crisis in his household and he steps up and does his best to resolve it. Same with his crush and with a few others. But the character really seems to start going downhill past any initial interaction he has with anyone. To the point that he becomes extremely unlikable extremely fast. Especially in how he deals with Estelle(who's a rather annoying character in their own right) and Atty. Playing through a good part of his interactions with them was extremely cringe. Even the "resolution" to those archs made me roll my eyes more than anything as he didn't really seem to grow or learn anything or face any real consequences. So it's a character who is initially flawed with plenty of room to grow, but that shows they will go out of their way to protect those he cares about, that then goes on to be the one violating those he supposedly cares about and facing little to no consequences for it and not really growing at all as a character.
Good day jyp games i just want permission to tell android gamers that there is a way to move save files with any games that run on renpy engine including scarlet law without using a pc or any external help by using mt manager. I will provide the instructions to you first if you are interested.
Just played the game for the first time, and i really like it. Makoto was my favourite until Rita started acting all nice and wholesome with Silvia and her hugging one another, she’s the cutest. Can’t wait for future updates 🫡
I wouldn't say that's the only problem, but it certainly is annoying. I don't mind the occasional 4th wall break in games, and some correctly they can be really funny, but it seems more often than not characters will use just about any excuse to break the 4th wall in ways that don't enhance the story or the scenes at all.
i saw the description in the front page and was about to report the game until i saw that every comment was positive. Checked it out and honnestly it's not what i expected when i saw "buy women" (LOL). It's a pretty good game.
Thanks for the comment. I agree with what you said. I think it's important for people to understand that there are ~10 characters in the game and not all of them will strike one's fancy.
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when's the next release?
Check their patreon.
Will there be another update?
Hello, i am a bit lost as it seems there is no more questing after i raised celestia's affection and unlock all her scenes, but i see there are at least 20+ scenes that need unlocking. What am i supposed to do next? can i get help pls
When will it be updated?
Trying to download this windows vs and keeps saying that the file is not available on site.
Why the development update so long?
I'm at the part of the story with Altina being bought by the MC but so far, I very much agree with one of the comments down below.
The protagonist is a wuss. It doesn't feel like I'm playing "as" him but rather, I'm just watching him be dick on himself. Last I checked, the description says that the protagonist is supposed to be the "hero of the story but he doesn't feel like a hero at all. He saved his landlady and friend, then revived Azula but after that, everything went downhill regarding his character. He's too indecisive in scenarios that matter the most. On the off chance that he makes a decision, the story forces you to make the worse choice. For example, the story established Vie as an extremely arrogant and hostile character towards the MC but doing Altina's questline, you're given the option to tie loose ends with her or let her go. Oh. Lo and behold, you get a game over when choosing one of the choices.
Second, some of the romanceable characters aren't likeable at all. For example, I get that Estelle is a tsundere type but the way she's made is, well, annoying, to say the least. Her lines are so overused, she doesn't improve her character, she gets involved in other characters' story arcs so much that it's more of a hindrance than a joy to see it. By the time I get to her own story arc, I already got tired of seeing her that I no longer paid attention to the dialogue and just skipped everything because I already had my fill of Estelle screen time through the other quests. Same with Azula. Her character is extremely ironic by saying that her species don't care about morality but she chastises the MC for lewding on other girls, specifically Altina's questline.
Third is the lore. It's so jam packed with story that it's getting old. Don't misunderstand. I like it when novels delve into the details but it's done so rough in this specific title. Flashbacks, for the most part, are welcome, but it is so out of place in here. As an example, a good flashback chapter is done in another visual novel called My Bully is My Lover (if any of you reading my comment read that novel, you probably know which chapter I'm talking about). The flashback in that visual novel chapter is EXTREMELY LONG but I did not feel tired of seeing it. In fact, I would've replayed the novel without skipping anything. However, in here, the flashbacks just makes the story more vague contrary to MBiML tying up loose ends in the story via the flashback. It is not enjoyable to say the least. Besides, I feel like the flashbacks are trying hard to give personality to the characters involved but it's doing more harm than good, IMO, because one, I'd rather give the screentime to the MC and have him improve his personality instead of establishing something else that happened outside of the novel's time setting. Two, you're walking on the edge of a knife here by showcasing the girls involved with other dudes. I know they aren't NTR, just to make that clear but I wouldn't want to read a story about a guy watching his girlfriend's old AV tapes.
Fourth, side characters. They are getting introduced by the droves and it's becoming a chore to remember them. I don't know if you have a plan to involve the Champions into the romance but they don't interest me at the moment. Suddenly focusing the camera on them when the questline is about someone else is annoying. I would've understood if it was a Main Quest but nope, it's listed as Altina's (Honestly, it feels more of a main quest so just gonna put that opinion out there). It's the same with Estelle as I mentioned above. She's way too involved in other character's story quests.
Now, I may be blabbering about Altina too much but that's just because it's where I noticed a ton of really bad story details. It's not an isolated case. I can pretty much keep going with Estelle, Celestia, and Laureate.
With the Princess, she's the same as Azula. Her character is extremely ironic. She's the person running the Scarlet Contract business but she chastises the MC for using her services.
Makoto's mistaken for a guy trope got old after the first one.
Celestia's character development is downhill. She was a better character before joining the household. At least, she was doing her best when she was living in the street. After being bought, she turned to this kind of slobbering mess of a person. The story isn't helping by justifying it as "half breeds do what half breeds want". Contradictory, I'd say. She's tamed and educated judging by her story but her current personality says otherwise.
PS: I'm not doing this criticism out of spite but rather, in hopes of seeing improvement to the game.
Cheers!
I appreciate your honest feedback.
I don't understand why you're being downvoted. You stated your opinion on a game, and while not everyone will agree with it, others will, including me. But I guess some people can't accept that
I can pretty much understand the downvotes. I read and reread my comment before and after posting it and I can actually see it coming as hateful towards the VN. That's why I included the postscript at the end. I wanted to let the reader (especially the dev, seeing as he's already seen the comment) know that I posted the comment with the best intentions as I really want to see the story and characters move towards better development. However, I wouldn't have bren able to get the message across if I sugarcoated my words or if I walked on eggshells around it.
I didn't expect the lore to be deep asf, amazing work 🔥
When is the next update
my name and relations is set to 'None' after buying Makoto!! help
Start a new game, set your name again and relationships. Then load up your save. The name should be changed for all your other saves.
after some time flowers just won't spawn and i don't know why is tht, pls if u can fix this issue, thnx🔥
Not sure I've heard this bug before. Are you making sure to sleep? If more people point out this bug, I'll do more digging.
okay i founded out why is tht, if u hold max amount of flower, for me it was 30 SR flowers, no more flowers will spawn cuz of that maxed amount
What are some fast ways to make money?
Find Serena
Overtime
Sleep
Find Serena
Overtime
Sleep
…
Genius.
Serena is great early (and if you're lazy). But as you progress through the game, the other girls provide much higher income (income scales with quests).
Thanks.
im sorry, but other income things is unstability then gain less, that Serena. Then have random pay and not 100% succsess.
save editor
I know I'm several updates behind but thanks for fixing how the Android version is installed I can finally play the game that I loved so much and excited to see what new stuff you added
good luck! thanks for sticking around
May I ask the author when will the next updated version come out?
The premise is enticing- slave fetish fits into the harem genre well and putting it in law form justifies the player's actions within this small fantasy town. That validation is huge for a game like this and provides a solid foundation for world building.
However, I have to agree with many of the comments below. MC is incredibly cringe. Characters also don't seem to grow- they just get more or less attached to each other. These factors remove any sense of immersion. So instead of playing as the MC, the player ends up watching a story of some loser fumbling through life, accidentally gaining ownership of his friends and (family). Granted, I'm not caught up to the latest update, so hopefully that changes soon.
It's been a bumpy ride so far, but there's still a ton of potential here. Unlike similar games, the girls' tits are actually mostly proportional to their frames. The baseline character profiles are unique enough to tell them apart immediately. The overarching story is engaging enough to encourage progression. With some small changes and a bit more content, it could easily be one of the more successful games out there.
I sincerely look forward to the game's development and hope the community feedback has some impact on its growth.
Thanks for the feedback. I think I could have made the MC more likeable especially early on. I think he does get better as the course of the game, but that's just my opinion.
Honestly I think that's the right call it shows that the character is growing and gaining confidence in himself, when you do it that way.
I thought Sakura from naruto was the only character I hated because she was just way to dumb and stuck up for the protagonists feelings. But Estella is I guess her sister. Fucking hate both for just being this dense. If I could make Estella suffer in this vn I would do it without a second thought, even if I had to go back and suffer myself for the story to progress. Thanks my rant for garbage Estella.
Well the vn is really nice. I do hope to get to finish it in some more time. All the best for future updates.
I've played this game on and off throughout development but it always gets harder and harder to come back to it simply due to the character development or honestly the complete lack of character development, it's almost like they are Family Guy Characters in how they constantly make the same mistakes over and over again yet no matter what happens to them and what thye "learn" they simply continue being the same person that they where when you first met them and this goes heavily for the MC as well.
I guess you are trying to make it so that the MC isn't a character that is already extremely powerful or that they have to work for what they have, but when you make your MC also someone tht has a subway foot long and the typical handsome build body every other MC these types of games have It just leads to your MC being very pathetic.
Don't get me wrong stuff like this can work Lewd Town if that's the correct name is a game similar to this where the MC starts out for the majority of the first chapter of the game being a VERY ugly disgusting character, extremely anti social and also perverted as all fuck.
But over time through the first chapter He ends up losing up bit by bit until he gets forcefully transformed into your typical Hentai protag. He still has his old shit personality he's just hot with a big dick now and throughout the rest of the story he DOES get better and grow stronger to fit into his new role.
I Feel like that's what you guys are trying to do with this MC but it's just not getting to that point at all. He's weak, he's a push over, he's a cuck basically. For something that states no NTR you crafted the MC that honestly Deserves to be NTRed the most
My old save don't work, what to do?
idk, hope it helped
Why does every download always fail 😭, even though the network and storage are still adequate
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I have a question. When I transfer my saves, everything is transferred but my in game name is changed to None. Is there a way to fix that?
my game is not opening how to fix it? it just gives me that little blue circle and nothing happens
Para cuando en español?
I'm so fucking hate the MC..
Is the mc will stay like this or he will awaken something other than his thing?
Edit: i didn't mean anything bad im just curious and sarcastic maybe.. Im invested on the story but i cant help to see the mc being left out in terms of ability to fight and have to rely to the girls in dire cases.
Estelle is getting out of hand.
Played through most of the game and I am divided. One half I like the game as it is good but with the other half the story is painfully frustrating. So this will come off as probably a rant or tyraid, I like the gameplay but hate how irritating the characters can be.
The game needs work, it has problems on Android and ends up closing out on me when I play for a time. The auto saves are also not consistent so it makes these occurrences a pain. So manually saving is a constant necessity. Other than that it isn't to bad as a game still in development.
As for the story, the characters are mixed, some you can like and others are just painfully annoying. The main character is an idiot as far as I can see. He is constantly pushed around by everyone, with that type of tendency it is a miracle he went out of his way to save anyone, given the first choice in the game which is a serious one, he is either pathetic or someone who is at least trying, and his redeeming quality being he isn't a complete scumbag and tries to help others. The other characters are a mix of hardworking or smart people with quirks that make them likable, or they are the most inept and aggravating of the cast. It's hard playing the game when characters cause problems again and again, and don't learn or change, the MC who is the player being one of those characters.
The game is fun but is dragged down by characters who will repeat the same tendencies of causing problems and doing really dumb things. I actually had headaches dealing with certain characters and story moments, because they were that dumb. So I am taking a break from this game. I want to see this game again when it is more developed, so hopefully the Android version gets some tweaks by then to.
Thanks for making this game JYP GAMES, but I can't fully enjoy playing it. Please accept my apologies for how rude this comment must have been, I do like this game and the mysterious Scarlet lore, it is just grating to deal with characters who are so frustrating.
I'm the same as you lol. I also feel the money grind for some story quests isn't justified. The bad writing does make it more discouraging.
i wont lie. this mc is so punchable.
If i remember this game right at least the last time i checked it out its not so much that the mc is punchable its that he seems week. The author seems to be trying to make him seem more likable by making him weaker which is having an opposite effect at least that is what is bothering me. He is a push over perv remincent of Issei but without Issei's good qualities of actually being decent underneath the perverseness while also having potential to back up. Also in the potential department actually considering giving this another shot to see if that particular issue was fixed.Also the one animal eared girl betrayal scene has made me reluctant to give it another shot am debating with myself.
My issue with the MC isn't really that he's weak. It's that he barely seems to have any redeeming qualities at all. Or rather, the few redeeming qualities he has seen to be continuously ignored in favor of him just being a pathetic, perverted, borderline rapey moron. The beginning was good. He was an unmotivated dude who just kinda existed, then he's presented with a crisis in his household and he steps up and does his best to resolve it. Same with his crush and with a few others. But the character really seems to start going downhill past any initial interaction he has with anyone. To the point that he becomes extremely unlikable extremely fast. Especially in how he deals with Estelle(who's a rather annoying character in their own right) and Atty. Playing through a good part of his interactions with them was extremely cringe. Even the "resolution" to those archs made me roll my eyes more than anything as he didn't really seem to grow or learn anything or face any real consequences. So it's a character who is initially flawed with plenty of room to grow, but that shows they will go out of their way to protect those he cares about, that then goes on to be the one violating those he supposedly cares about and facing little to no consequences for it and not really growing at all as a character.
Good day jyp games i just want permission to tell android gamers that there is a way to move save files with any games that run on renpy engine including scarlet law without using a pc or any external help by using mt manager. I will provide the instructions to you first if you are interested.
Adult game but censor?
I was thinking of buy this but if its censord good call random dude on the internet for warning me
There isn't censorship. Idk what they're talking about
Nah I just wasn't far enough in at the time couple of early scenes are censored though.
Just played the game for the first time, and i really like it. Makoto was my favourite until Rita started acting all nice and wholesome with Silvia and her hugging one another, she’s the cutest. Can’t wait for future updates 🫡
any pregnancy?
does ANYONE know where to put the cheat code $10
There are no codes. The $10 version allows you to fully unlock the gallery. You have to download the game through my Patreon/Stars to access this.
I manage to convince a friend of mine to play this game and now his interest on how the story will unfold and I also want to know more
Glad to hear it!
Only problem with this game is the fact that everyone in it is openly breaking the 4th wall like all the time
I wouldn't say that's the only problem, but it certainly is annoying. I don't mind the occasional 4th wall break in games, and some correctly they can be really funny, but it seems more often than not characters will use just about any excuse to break the 4th wall in ways that don't enhance the story or the scenes at all.
i saw the description in the front page and was about to report the game until i saw that every comment was positive. Checked it out and honnestly it's not what i expected when i saw "buy women" (LOL). It's a pretty good game.
Thanks for playing.
Thanks for the comment. I agree with what you said. I think it's important for people to understand that there are ~10 characters in the game and not all of them will strike one's fancy.
I'll look into it. Thanks for playing.